句型	Example	Appeared in	Notes
[Subject], being a vast repository of [Subject]	The internet, being a vast repository of information, provides good health advice.	Practice

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先把簡單的東西寫出來，雖然說Thesis在intro的第二句話，但最好先寫出來。 BASIC MEDIUM 更為具體一點，如果想得到，用這裡的，想不到就用BASIC的。倒裝句 MEDIUM-HARD 更為Specific，如果考雅思，他問best way的題目就可以用這裡的句型。
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Vocabulary

Original Word Synonyms Examples
Satisfies Meets, fulfills “The candidate fulfills the qualifications for the engineering position.”
Stun Halt, impede “The sudden policy change could impede the progress of the project.”
Golden time period Prime years, peak period “Athletes often perform best during their prime years.”
Collapse Fail, breakdown “Without adequate support, the initiative might fail.”
Reallocate Redistribute, reassign

Grammar

Original Sentence Grammar Example
Many companies nowadays are facing with the same issue. Present continuous: [Subject] are [issue] “Several organizations are currently facing budgetary constraints.”
Doing an unpaid work for a period would stun the overall production Conditional: [Gerund] [action] would [effect] “Implementing these changes would improve the team’s efficiency.”
For instance, it is better for a gym to hire a trainer. Example introduction: For instance, it is [adjective] for [entity] to [action] “For example, it is advantageous for a tech company to hire a data scientist.”
AI chatbots don’t have to rest. Negative: [Subject] do not have to [action] “Employees do not have to work overtime on weekends.”
Governments should reconsider reallocating the community jobs Modal verb: [Subject] should [action] “Individuals should take responsibility for their actions.”

Topic Dev.

Original Idea Questions Suggestions
Many companies couldn’t find young employees that satisfies the job requirements. What specific job requirements are these companies looking for? Provide details about the skills or qualifications companies seek in young employees.
Doing an unpaid work would stun the overall production rate of the nation. How exactly does unpaid work affect the nation’s production rate? Explain the relationship between unpaid work and economic productivity.
It is better for a gym to hire a young adult as its coach. Why is a young adult more suitable for this role? Are there other examples? Provide reasoning and additional examples where young adults are preferred for certain jobs.
AI chatbots don’t have to rest, and therefore have the advantage in customer service. How do these features of AI chatbots compare to human workers? Discuss the strengths and limitations of AI compared to human capabilities.

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Vocabulary

原始句子高級詞彙同義詞
While it seemed like staying longer at work delivers higher quality of work, longer working time poses physical strain and health problems to workers. delivers, poses, strain provides, presents, pushed, limits, results
Long hours of work leads to physical strain. When the body is pushed beyond the limits of the worker, it often results in stress and discomfort. pushed, limits, results compelled, boundaries, leads
The repetitive factory work can negatively impact workers’ physical health. repetitive, negatively, impact monotonous, adversely, affect
Workers that stays at the company longer will have less time sleeping at home. stays, company, sleeping remain, firm, resting

Grammar

Original Sentence Grammar Template / Formula Sample Sentence
While it seemed like staying longer at work delivers higher quality of work, longer working time poses physical strain and health problems to workers. While it seems like [Action] delivers [Positive outcome], [Contrasting action] poses [Negative outcomes] to [Subject]. While it seems like studying more hours delivers better grades, excessive studying poses mental fatigue and decreased social interaction to students.
The repetitive factory work can negatively impact worker’s physical health. [Adjective] [Type of work] can negatively impact [Subject’s] [Aspect of life]. The sedentary office job can negatively impact employees’ physical fitness.

Topic Dev.

Sentence Thought Process Other Possible Ideas
While it seemed like staying longer at work delivers higher quality of work, longer working time poses physical strain and health problems to workers. While it seems like [Action] delivers [Positive outcome], [Contrasting action] poses [Negative outcomes] to [Subject]. While it seems like studying more hours delivers better grades, excessive studying poses mental fatigue and decreased social interaction to students.
Long hours of work leads to physical strain. When the body is pushed beyond the limits of the worker, it often results in stress and discomfort. What are the physical consequences of long working hours? How does it affect a worker’s body and mind? Continuous hours of work lead to mental burnout and physical ailments, as the stress exceeds an individual’s capacity to cope.
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Original Word	Synonyms	Examples
Satisfies	Meets, fulfills	“The candidate fulfills the qualifications for the engineering position.”
Stun	Halt, impede	“The sudden policy change could impede the progress of the project.”
Golden time period	Prime years, peak period	“Athletes often perform best during their prime years.”
Collapse	Fail, breakdown	“Without adequate support, the initiative might fail.”
Reallocate	Redistribute, reassign

Original Sentence	Grammar	Example
Many companies nowadays are facing with the same issue.	Present continuous: [Subject] are [issue]	“Several organizations are currently facing budgetary constraints.”
Doing an unpaid work for a period would stun the overall production	Conditional: [Gerund] [action] would [effect]	“Implementing these changes would improve the team’s efficiency.”
For instance, it is better for a gym to hire a trainer.	Example introduction: For instance, it is [adjective] for [entity] to [action]	“For example, it is advantageous for a tech company to hire a data scientist.”
AI chatbots don’t have to rest.	Negative: [Subject] do not have to [action]	“Employees do not have to work overtime on weekends.”
Governments should reconsider reallocating the community jobs	Modal verb: [Subject] should [action]	“Individuals should take responsibility for their actions.”

Original Idea	Questions	Suggestions
Many companies couldn’t find young employees that satisfies the job requirements.	What specific job requirements are these companies looking for?	Provide details about the skills or qualifications companies seek in young employees.
Doing an unpaid work would stun the overall production rate of the nation.	How exactly does unpaid work affect the nation’s production rate?	Explain the relationship between unpaid work and economic productivity.
It is better for a gym to hire a young adult as its coach.	Why is a young adult more suitable for this role? Are there other examples?	Provide reasoning and additional examples where young adults are preferred for certain jobs.
AI chatbots don’t have to rest, and therefore have the advantage in customer service.	How do these features of AI chatbots compare to human workers?	Discuss the strengths and limitations of AI compared to human capabilities.

原始句子	高級詞彙	同義詞
While it seemed like staying longer at work delivers higher quality of work, longer working time poses physical strain and health problems to workers.	delivers, poses, strain	provides, presents, pushed, limits, results
Long hours of work leads to physical strain. When the body is pushed beyond the limits of the worker, it often results in stress and discomfort.	pushed, limits, results	compelled, boundaries, leads
The repetitive factory work can negatively impact workers’ physical health.	repetitive, negatively, impact	monotonous, adversely, affect
Workers that stays at the company longer will have less time sleeping at home.	stays, company, sleeping	remain, firm, resting

Original Sentence	Grammar Template / Formula	Sample Sentence
While it seemed like staying longer at work delivers higher quality of work, longer working time poses physical strain and health problems to workers.	While it seems like [Action] delivers [Positive outcome], [Contrasting action] poses [Negative outcomes] to [Subject].	While it seems like studying more hours delivers better grades, excessive studying poses mental fatigue and decreased social interaction to students.
The repetitive factory work can negatively impact worker’s physical health.	[Adjective] [Type of work] can negatively impact [Subject’s] [Aspect of life].	The sedentary office job can negatively impact employees’ physical fitness.