模板
Summary Indicators+rewrite intro 使用 if you…you might 或者 …unless…+prediction+recommendation
題目：
Learning to write properly is beneficial for critical thinking and vocabulary practice.
Step 1: Indicators
Conclusion寫In conclusion, in sum… 很low，不要這樣寫，可寫：
- After all is said and done, 如果想要寫很快的一個結論，
- In essence,
- Fundamentally, Summary indicators 其餘請見講義
Step 2: Rewrite Intro
Example 1
Introduction
Critical thinking and vocabulary practice are beneficial for learning to write properly.
改寫
- 同義字：可以改vocabulary，如properly 可以改為 doing the right way.
- 改文法，如active→ passive Critical thinking and vocabulary can be improved… / can benefit from…/ can help something…
- **變更主角：**可以加一個主角，如，這句話主角是學生，就可以去講說是怎麼樣的一個學生 who? → students可以改成college students
- verb: can learn/ improve/ strengthen/ gain/ get
- object: their critical thinking and vocabulary
Exercise 1
Do you agree taking gap year before college?
或之類的，我憑印象
Brainstorm
beneficial —means⇒ brings many benefits ⇒ meeting new people ⇒ helping career
Intro Thesis
Brainstorm： Agree
connection: chances to meet different kinds of people
career: after meeting all kinds of people, it might have some beneficial impact on your career.
Taking a gap year is beneficial because it provide chances to meet different kinds of people that you normally can’t interact with, and it also brings positive impacts to your career.
老師feedback：紅字資訊太多，寫在Thesis會導致後面難以發展
Conclusion
When all is considered, gap year offers the opportunity to meet new people and advance our career.
Step 3: Make a prediction
第一句Restate the Main Idea寫完之後，就可以接著一個so（make a prediction） 可以是正面可以是負面的
Example
so that you can make more money…，做一個與錢有關的正向預測 或是if you don’t take a gap year, you might give up in college. 做一個與心境有關的負面預測 或是薪水較低
通常Conclusion的Make a prediction 用if或unless就可以了
Step 4: Recommendation
可以用一個範圍
以藝人經濟公司為例，可以寫說經紀公司應該要做一些事情來避免藝人做出事情來改善那些心裡問題，例如讓藝人互相支持等等