Thesis
Hook 的句型結構如講義page=1
先把簡單的東西寫出來,雖然說Thesis在intro的第二句話,但最好先寫出來。
BASIC
MEDIUM
更為具體一點,如果想得到,用這裡的,想不到就用BASIC的。
倒裝句
MEDIUM-HARD
更為Specific,如果考雅思,他問best way的題目就可以用這裡的句型。

Example
Write about the following topic: The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
People’s health are getting better because of the medical advancements and the rapid rate of spreading good information.
GPT Revise:
- dissemination:spreading People’s health are getting better because of the medical advancements and the dissemination of good information.
而good information可以用以下代替
- valuable knowledge"
- "beneficial insights"
- "quality data"
- "reliable intelligence"
- "useful information"
- "pertinent facts"
- "credible guidance”
老師修正
People’s health are getting better in the future because of the medical advancements and the rapid rate of spreading good information.
這裡沒有提到題目的一部分的重點,如果加上in the future(原句的部分)就可以回歸到題目本身的東西。
Conclusion
People’s health will be improved if the medical advancements and the widespread of good health advice are met.
Hook
BASIC
將題目變成一個疑問page=4
這裡是直接改寫題目的名詞或是動詞。
起手式:Have you ever fantasized
假設是要描述越來越健康:你知道嗎?現在人均年齡是85歲?…
假設是要描述越來越不健康:你知道嗎?現在近視人口越來越多?…
起手式:Did you know
MEDIUM
MEDIUM中的句型,在後面寫Thesis的時候應該加上:In fact,
這部分就要找一個有爭議的事情,要剛剛好想得到,如:你知道現在體育課要被取消了嗎?
範本中While其實就是although的意思

起手式: Contrary to the widespread belief that … the reality is …(far more complex)…
很討厭的

想像
請在這邊加一個in fact

起手式:Imagine …
Example
Have you ever wondered the future average health of all human kinds?
想到這邊,想完Hook之後要回頭看下一句的Thesis有沒有重複,比如說,我的Thesis跟Hook都有in the future,就可以在下一句話把他省略。
in fact可以作為句子的一個轉折。
Did you know that 69% of the population live a happy life? 後面可以接In fact,…
Conclusion改寫
- 主動改被動 (SVO : O be Vpp (by S.(可省略)))
- not only A1/R1 but also A2/R2 ⇒ (improve/decline/benefit/harm) health(以我的thesis,這會比較適合)
Prediction
如:未來的人都no illness
Recommendation
如,大家就可以去更注重生活品質、在乎心理健康,(Mental Quality of Life)
建議對象: 大:聯合國;中:GOV/National;小:School/ Institution/ Family
句型
可用在Prediction or Recommendation **Prediction: ** If this continues, SV. **Recommendation: ** If we were to solve this problem, SV… or If we were to ensure this outcome, SV…
要用什麼句型?
上述為大概,講義下方提供你的不同問題應該用什麼樣的句型 page=5