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I agree with Karen. Karen stated that the individual lifestyle has a impact on fighting climate change. She points out that by conserving energy, reducing any type of waste, and adopting sustainable habits can make a change to climate change. However, she didn’t mention on how it would impact the planet, therefore I would add that by doing jobs mentioned by her, we can lower the unnecessary CO2 produced, and at the end of the day, lower the average global temperature.
Brad mentioned that changes and government policies are crucial to combat with climate change, but I think he should add more points on how industries produce wasteful products that impact our climate. For example, for a country consists with lots of semiconductor firms, they use lots and lots of energy and most of them are fusil fuels, making the matters worse.

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I agree with Karen because of her emphasis on individual responsibilities of tackling climate change. Karen stated that the individual lifestyle choices has an impact on our fight against climate change, especially through conserving energy consumption, reducing any type of waste, and adopting sustainable habits can make a change to climate change. However, she didn’t mention on how it would impact the planet, therefore didn’t provide specific details on how to save energy. I would add that by doing these practices mentioned by her. We can lower the unnecessary CO2 produced, and at the end of the day, lower the average global temperature. I would add that individuals should choose energy efficient appliances. By doing so, power plants won’t be required to generate lots of energies, resulting less air pollution, cleaner environment, and most importantly, less impact on climate change. On the other hand, Brad mentioned stated that changes and to government policies are crucial to combat with climate change, but I think he should add more points explain on how industries produce wasteful products that impact our climate. For example, for a country consists with lots of semiconductor firms, they use lots and lots of energy and most of them are fusil fossil fuels, which increases overall greenhouse gas emission, and worsening our climate crisis.

抓他的論點，之後講一些how/so 的廢話 如，conserving energy : how? so? how: buying

Toshi’s Revision

first sentence SOP:

1. read topic
2. agree w/ 1st person + type → view + 1st sentence. → explain/ simplify 2nd sentence (reasoning)
3. (think) which point by same person easier to elaborate.
4. on the other hand → attack 2nd people. 每1~2句=idea，and attack on 他少講什麼 →HOW: He didn’t explain how. SO WHAT: He failed to describe the impact. WHY: He omitted the reason behind this decision.